Showing posts with label Draft Magazine. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Draft Magazine. Show all posts
Wednesday, 11 January 2012
Tuesday, 13 December 2011
Feedback from target audience double page spread
I have asked a member of my target audience to give me some feedback on my double page spread. They have said that they like the layout that I have used as its simple and easy to read. This layout is also important as many magazines follow this type of layout. They said they liked the pictures that I have used and that they are very fun and creative which will catch peoples attention. They also explained that I have used a good balance between text and photos. For improvements they suggested that I add more to the double page spread so there is not as much blank space around the edges, I could do this by making the pull quote text large or adding any extra information.
Cam studio double page spread
Cam Studio draft contents page
Monday, 12 December 2011
Tuesday, 6 December 2011
Contents Page Feedback
I have asked a member of my target audience to give me feedback about my contents page, they have said that they like my contents page, its simple and easy to read which which is very important. They have said that the boxes and categories within my contents page are good because they allow the reader to find articles easily. The pictures that I have used are good because they are fun and creative. The style of writing is a good choice as its simple. She also explained to me that it would be good if I added a picture into the blank space on the left hand side of the page.
Monday, 5 December 2011
Monday, 28 November 2011
Draft Front Cover - Feedback
Feedback from target audience
I have asked a member of my target audience to give me feedback about my draft front cover. They have said that they like the picture that I have used and it has been put in a good place in the middle as this is what you normally see in a magazine. They also really like the banner at the bottom of the page as it allows the readers to see what will be included in the magazine and in short words. The bright pink background of the banner stands out which catches the target audience attention. They like the colour scheme that I have used and said that the front have had used it good as its easy to read. The bold masthead is also very important as it stands out.
Cam Studio First Draft Front Cover
This is a short video with the step by step progress of adding all of the elements to my first draft of my music magazine front cover.
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